ARTIFICIAL Mustaches

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 A famous hair style MF Husane

He is famous for his creative hair cutting. 

Once a small kid wants to grow his moustache because he thinks that every mustaches person finds good attention. So he also wants to grab the attention of a girl of his school named pari. 

He went to the Mf. Husane saloon. As I have discussed his ability. He make a artificial moustache. And make the small boy loke like a Jentleme

Next days the boy arrived at the school with the Sexy moustache. His one sided girlfriend  pari saw her but didn't recognise him. 

The boy found that she even not got a single attention of her. 

Soon he realised that his age was too small and same with the girl also. 

this incident changed the view point of that boy. God give us such a special lite where we can enjoy every party of our life. 

What will happen next? 

Is the boy able to grab the attention of pari. Are they fall in lov? 

next part is arriving soon. 



Comments

  1. AnmolApril 26, 2021 at 1:23 AM

    You have already written their that boy's point of view has changed so what has left for end??
    Starting was good. You can make it more interesting.

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    1. King of thoughtApril 26, 2021 at 2:17 AM

      Thanks for your suggestion, yes it was missing some rising action. Sorry but , in the end I have mentioned the change in view but first love remains the first one.what do you think?

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  2. Dipank sharmaApril 26, 2021 at 1:35 AM

    All over it's good
    But one can find some mistakes in it.

    Like use of capitalization and full stop at the end.

    But still it's all good.

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    1. King of thoughtApril 26, 2021 at 2:12 AM

      Yes I agree, I will definitely work on it. Thanks

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  3. SomyasaifiApril 26, 2021 at 2:50 AM

    Just need to work on your spelling errors and capitalization overall your message is very clear that we have to enjoy every phase of our life. Thats Gud

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    1. King of thoughtApril 26, 2021 at 7:46 AM

      Yes, you are right.
      I will definitely work on it.
      Thanks

      Delete
  4. UnknownApril 26, 2021 at 8:33 AM

    Very nice , inciting incident , rising action were there to make it more interesting work on climax.
    Work on spellings and capitalisation.

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  5. UnknownApril 26, 2021 at 8:34 AM

    Very nice, inciting incident, rising action were there to make it more interesting work on climax,.
    Work on capitalisation and spelling mistakes.

    ReplyDelete

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