Journey to the Mars
Where are you dad? A 10 years old boy named juno asking this question by looking into the sky. He used to live with his dad at Florida,USA. Mr. Smith the father of the juno, was a scientist at NASA. He had a deep intereste in space exploration.
First time in the human history NASA planned a mission of three crew members with the aim MARS ONE. The aim of finding a trace of life on Mars.
Mr. Smith Inrolled himself into it and got selected. NASA provided the necessary training to them. This mission was dived into three parts.
1. ISS ( international space Station)
2 Lander
3. Evacuation
The mission passed the first stage successfully but meet with a devastating accident the solar Strom.one of the crew members died instantly due to the excessive heat coming from the solar wind. The surviver one told the NASA that Mr. Smith saved my life. He described the situation that Mr. Saved my life but I don't know what happened with him.
So NASA called the mission off but couldn't find the trace of living of Mr. Smith.
Juno, the Smith's son grew older and decided to find his father. He also joined the NASA .
NASA played a tric with the Juno, and send him to the ISS. The plane was to send a voice massage into the space so that if Mr. Smith was alive then he would get more knowledge about the space.
After reaching at ISS, Juno send a scripted massage several time but didn't get any replayed. But a benevolent person mare a decision to gave him a free hand. So this time Juno send a emotional massage to his dad. Hay dad, I am your Juno, you told me that we will live together on Mars but look I am here but you are not with me.
After getting a such a emotional massage Mr. Smith replied with in five hours.
So NASA tried to called the mission off, by sending Juni to earth but Juno decided to find his dad by his one. So stealed a spacecraft and move ahed to find his Dad.
After reaching at his dad, he saw he was living a happy life with his gadgets and knowledge. And refused to go back with the Juno because of his love for the space exploration.
Juno tried a lot but not be able to convince him so both are started living with one- another in the space with his curiosity.
One way to the Mars.


You have provided good starting and included some emotional points. But keep it in 250 words.
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Well done Raja, good inciting incident , rising action, and climax of the story can have a better explanation of the resolution. You have improved your spelling mistakes but not completely so focus there more now.
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